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weak
i know i am but
why is no one else?
why isnt anyone else on their knees?
are they shielding themselves?
is mine made of paper?
golden knights with golden swords
they smile and walk past me
like im imaginary
like im worth less than nothing

maybe i am

these tears
they always flow
and they wet my paper shield
and im left defenceless
nothing but these small hands
that cant do anything
they get me nowhere
and they already have holes through
from trying to save what i wish i didnt have

my heart
small things can do so much damage
hold so much
i was born with a heart i cant close
and everyone theyre always staring
swords to paper
go away go away
my screams were always ignored
and people love violence
in a world like this

in a world like this
the weak are never considered
©2007-2009 ~moons-descent
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another poem i just wrote =)
thanks to anyone that reads (:

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:iconmeibu-meadhbh-maeve:
I love these lines:
"they always flow
and they wet my paper shield
and im left defenceless"

Fantastic imagery, it flows really well.

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Self-Proclaimed Supreme Ruler of the Universe

Who are you? Who am I? What are we but perceptions in each other's minds? You think you know me. But existence is subjective.
:iconqueenclaudette:
Zana, another Brilliant piece of work, you should try and get some of your published, this is fantastic.

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I has a bear. My bear is called Max. Hail Max, for he shall entice you with spicy asian noodles and cheesecake.
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:iconmoons-descent:
thanks Sam :D you always comment on my poems... (= & same goes for you...yours should be published too n_n tytyty

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:iconqueenclaudette:
Yay :D
Jam tonight
Grrr
Can sam use your computer
pretty please?
I'll give you your christmas present early :nod:

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I has a bear. My bear is called Max. Hail Max, for he shall entice you with spicy asian noodles and cheesecake.

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