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not as great as before by ~moons-descent:iconmoons-descent:



empty
hollow
was it ever not?

you talk about how things use to be
how what I was like
once

before...

I didn't mean to
you know that but
but
you still bring it up
like i'm some kind of punching bag
(grimacing and spitting out blood)
that can handle every blow
(without ripping itself apart)

like i have a
empty
hollow
heart

like i feel nothing
a cold statue whose face will never change

like i am nothing
a lock on an innocent girls cage

...key buried and rotten

like my hand that holds yours
(cold and shaking)
is forever staying there

I guess...
with these things you say
with the way you treat me now
i'm starting to believe that...

that i...
really am...
not as great as i use to be...
©2007-2009 ~moons-descent
:iconmoons-descent:

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* hugs* I hope you feel better soon, though I dont really know you I'm sure your fine just the way you are. Maybe your not perfect but then who is? There's no excuse for the way someone is treating you ( guessing from what you said I'm guessing your being badly treated. )

Anywayz the poems really good I like it =)

*Thinks of something* Oh here's a joke ^^ might help you feel better


There were two twins, Joe and John. Joe was the owner of a old dilapidated boat. It just so happened that John's wife died the same day Joe's boat sank. A few days later a kindly old woman saw Joe, and mistaking him for John. Said "I'm sorry to hear about your loss. You must feel terrible"

Joe, thinking she was talking about his boat, said "Fact is, I'm sort of glad to get rid of her. She was a rotten old thing from the beginning. Her bottom was all shriveled up and she smelled like an old dead fish. She was always losing her water, she had a bad crack in the back and a pretty big hole in the front, too. Every time I used her the hole got bigger and she leaked like crazy. I guess what finished her off was when I rented her to those four guys looking for a good time for the weekend. I warned them that she wasn't very good, but they wanted to use her anyhow and were willing to pay. The fools all tried to get in her at the same time and split her right down the middle."

The old woman fainted.


Well thats the joke.

Did it help any?

--
At heart we're all self seeking and selfish Hearts are full of so much hate yet so much love to... Soiciety is what holds us together...
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lol zana getting abit violent there ^_^ nice poem bye the ways ^________^ :D

--
- i wish i was a coffin, so when you die i could hold you for eternity.
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